News Writing Workshop
Monday, November 15, 2010
Lifehacker has the best tips... even for writing.
Saturday, November 13, 2010
Backgrounding can be exciting!
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
What I like about this class so far?
Two Ledes, which one is better?
o A man robbed a local gas station last night after holding up the attendant with a switch blade knife only to escape on-foot with $14.37, said the city police.
o Last night a man held up a gas station attendant with a switch blade knife, only to escape on-foot with $14.37, said the city police.
SO. WHICH ONE IS A BETTER LEDE?
Here are the notes we were given.
· a. There was a holdup at a gas station last night.
b. A man armed with a switch blade knife held up the attendant.
c. The amount taken was $14.37.
d. After the robbery the man fled on foot.
e. The gas station is at 610 Mobile Ave.
f. All information came from city police.
g. There was a potted plant in the main office
h. The robber was white.
Thursday, September 2, 2010
Second Look-Through
Well-written Article
The article that I chose is about education. It was published on August 31, 2010, and it was written by Tania Valdemoro. The name is “More High School Students Learning in Other Languages.” This article caught my attention due to its topic. As I read into it, I liked many things about it that made it work for me.
One of the attributes that stand out about this article to me is the way in which it starts. The title of the article gave me an idea of what I might find inside, and it became the hook that made me take the time to read it. The lead is one that guides me through different programs that exist in different parts of
I liked that through the introduction it is very vague on the why and the how of the newsworthy topic, but as it goes on, it answers these questions not only with facts, but it is accompanied by responses by students of these new programs. I also liked that it is divided into sections with titles, so I know what the section deals with as I continue reading.
This article is successful in informing me about this alternative way to learn in different languages. It is much unbiased about the topic, being careful to stay away from controversial ideas such as these programs, especially the ones in Spanish, becoming a crutch for students who come from
I think that being impartial about news is important because it can be very easy to sway from the newsworthy content and move into feature and editorial forms of writing when working on an article. This article served as a good example of how to not do that.